Hi! I think the pose currently looks too stiff and lacks narrative (what's happening here?). Maybe take a step back from the highpoly, and blockout/ sketch different poses with focus on expression and narrative, look at miniatures and statues for inspiration. Could act out different pose yourself, see how it feels and…
My past tutors tell me to never ever state a quote during an interview. I don't know if thats easier said than done, but usually its better if they state their price. Often what happens when you state your price is either, its too low or too high. Which may end up screwing your chances or getting yourself undervalued. If…