Does this creature move freely or is it stuck in the ground? I suggest lightening the color of the tentacles to a yellowish green, and also tapering them to be large at the body of the monster. I like the color scheme, but feel the colors are too saturated. Also, I'm not noticing any spec or normal maps. If you plan on…
Right know the biggest thing that jumps out to me is the readability of the final presentation. Depth of field IS cool, and it certainly aids in presentation. he issue with yours, is it has a harsh alpha. The blur needs to soften the edges of the form as well, not just the interior information. Id also say that your…