2 Neo_God Yeah, man this look like separate words... Check this up my feedback: maybe this will be helpful http://www.plakaty.ru/posters?cid=1&thumbs=1&full=1&page=6&sort=year&id=25 http://www.plakaty.ru/posters?cid=4&part=1970&id=1430 http://www.plakaty.ru/posters?cid=1&thumbs=1&full=1&page=12&sort=year&id=707
Careful, she's looking downward. Your model looks like you're using a pic that's not straight on and contains perspectivic distortion as an ortho ref. That disturbs the 1/3-1/3-1/3 hairline-eyebrows-nose-chin partitioning of the face. Also, she's smiling while you modeled the mouth relaxed.