Looks like a good start. You can't plan to much. But really, you can't realize that thouse pillars are round? That's to complex for you? If so, wow.. But hey, see you around when you can tell a cylinder from a box ;) Don't know if your teacher talked about working with the grid? It's very handy, espcially on something like…
So first of, please stop talking yourself down. It's not gonna get you better. Realizing what level of skill your currently at? Absolutely a super awesome great idea, saying that you'r rubbish? Not so much. You should have seen my first modular facade, gee.. It's great to get in to the grid from day one with stuff like…