Looks fantastic! Definitely will follow this...since you are not done yet, hehe. The shoulders look a little droopy. I saw a corrected image and I think that's the way to go. The eyes look a little flat at the moment. Just needs a tiny bit of specular and it should pop it out. The philtrum (the little dip under the nose)…
this looks great man, I really like the different materials. I agree with the others about toning down the dark AO on her skin though. I think you should emphasize the spec on her eyes too to give em that wet look.
wow amazing model! really love the detail on the clothes. I think you can push the colour a bit more. Probably add some more spec on the nose, cheeks and forehead. Cause thats where oil collects on the face. Fantastic stuff overall. Keep it up!