This is really nice. I dig the materials and costume. One thing that really sticks out to me is that her shoulders seem very small and slight compared to the size of her torso, hips and head. They look kind of weak. I would expect them to be a bit more pronounced and strong looking for this character and pose.
Looks fantastic! Definitely will follow this...since you are not done yet, hehe. The shoulders look a little droopy. I saw a corrected image and I think that's the way to go. The eyes look a little flat at the moment. Just needs a tiny bit of specular and it should pop it out. The philtrum (the little dip under the nose)…