Really like this so far! As everyone has said the scene has come a long way. I've been reading through the feedback as its been pretty useful for me to. I think the levels fix Ichll3D did made a huge difference, and a few different people have commented about colour and lighting so I definitely think learning your…
imho you're still pushing the color saturation of your lighting too hard. On the one hand it's unifying all the different elements together. On the other hand I think it's all being lost in a mush of yellow. Take a look at your concept again or your own screenshot from before. With the concept the lighting is fairly…
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