Apologies if you're not familiar with all the anatomical terminology I'll be throwing out. I'm a bit of an anatomy nerd, and I like* using phrases like "Distal head of the tibia", not just because they make me sound smart, but also because they're precise. If you need anything converted to layman's terms, just ask. *By…
I like a lot of what you've done with the detailing and the burns, but overall it looks like it's placed over some uninformed anatomy and it's really killing the piece for me. It's a shame but I don't think it could be really good without starting over, and putting a lot more work into the underlying forms and structures…