I really like it man. I think you got the proportions pretty well from the concept. Only minor thing is that the gun belt and cartridges don't look very shiny at all. I'd guess darkening the diffuse might help since your spec is already pretty bright there.
Norron: Thanks dude, you make a good point of darkening the diffuse, that may help. Pickle: I totally know what you mean! The sharp edges are kinda what drew me to the concept in the first place. Adding a little color to the lei should be a simple fix and thanks! Neo: Oh yess material definition I was kinda iffy about…