i feel like there needs to be more of a focal point within the scene, my eyes keep looking for a place to rest and take in the scene as a whole. your lighting could also use a bit of work. heres a quick paintover illustrating some suggestions keep it up, its definitely coming together :thumbup:
in response to chrisradsby, i definitely didnt mean that simply changing the mood would "finish off" the scene, its just something to help focus the viewers attention. i believe the scene could use some more small and medium props scattered about and a little more of a "story" to go along with it.. personally i would focus…