fucking awesome sketches! god damn I'd love to be able to sketch out my animations! the animations on your site tells me you know how to animate and hopefully you'll take this up to the same level that you've got for most of the stuff on there! the walk to me is fairly weirdly paced and has lots of twitches going on on the…
Mezz: Strong animation overall! Really like mosts parts, even the overly sexy'ish thing where she shakes her hips to get her ammo. There are some awkward poses as earlier mentioned. I wouldn't change them but instead do another animation where you earlier in your process either share your works here or with a close friend…
Doesn't look like you've done much animation on the actual weapon, but when you do, remember to animate the slide getting locked back, the person then reloads, they then need to push the slide release for it to slide forward again and to arm the pistol - this is more focused on thumb animation though. There's two ways of…
Thanks for the great crits guys! Got a bit busy and haven't gotten a lot done on it until yesterday and today, but I did address everything mentioned. And in the process have watched lots of youtube gun videos (bless Texans) and have learned a lot about pistols. The gun doesn't have any animations (er... I didn't model it…
Ouch, that kinda hurts to hear because I have acted this whole anim out, again and again and again and again. Lower down on this page I also posted the thumbs I drew in the planning stages. However, I did act this out again just now with these points in mind. I do see what you mean about the stress on the left leg, but I…
Hullo Polycount! I'm revisiting an animation project I started back in July and I need some outsider input, since my eyes are having trouble spotting what needs to be done. Long story short, I was having back pain issues and had to stop working at the computer for a while, and now that I'm doing a bit better and trying to…
Sparkwire -- Thanks! I fixed that, hopefully it's better now. Marshal Banana -- I'm a little confused what you mean by her leaning forward in the middle of the reload, because I don't see it myself. Where exactly? Also, cool suggestion for the ending, but I think I have enough going on in the anim, I'd like to keep the…
Cexar -- Thanks so much, I really appreciate the reply. It's too bad about the awkwardness in the posing; I had shown it to a few friends earlier on, but none of them thought it looked awkward then or now. I guess it's a matter of how well you know guns/shooting? Either way, I quite agree that it's time to move on with…
Latest update: [ame=" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OECSC0RpHcs"]'Sexy' Gun shoot and tactical reload animation -- WIP 09 - YouTube[/ame] Mostly I added more polish throughout. I've smoothed out the walk, tweaked some areas that looked jolting to me, and fixed the second gun stance so the back leg is more bent. I've…
Did you act this out yourself and did you do any pre-planning /storyboarding?? Reason I ask is because I don't think I understand the pose while she is shooting. Does anyone shoot in a lunged position? The animation feels weird because it isn't a very natural shooting position... Partly because her legs are so far apart.…