I saw this floor and went with my own interpretation of it.For example the grid like things on both sides are rubber on my floor and not metal. Better lighting...I think I may get rid of the circle's too...
Try to pull a bit more from real life reference. If you tend to stick more to other conceptual pieces, you'll generally be grounded by the same drawbacks that fall upon them. Go for less decoration and more for form with function. If there's insets, think about why they are there. Paneling/raised platform/utility junction/…