15 - 19 could be cut. the tad bit of shooting at the beginning of the clip at 19 sec could be cut. Nothing really happened from 25 to 27. 29 to 33.5 was boring. 36 to 50 was really slow paced. 57 to 1:03 could probably be cut. Boring and slow paced. Now all of that aside. I really love what you did at the end. Without the…