15 - 19 could be cut. the tad bit of shooting at the beginning of the clip at 19 sec could be cut. Nothing really happened from 25 to 27. 29 to 33.5 was boring. 36 to 50 was really slow paced. 57 to 1:03 could probably be cut. Boring and slow paced. Now all of that aside. I really love what you did at the end. Without the…
Basically, take what you did in the last 10 second, and use that to emphasize different selling points of the game. More information, a couple of much shorter cuts, and probably some sort of concept-art-looking or advertisement-looking stuff in between. For example, have "8 DIFFERENT GRENADES" on some banner, and then have…