Looking at the screen shot you are basing this off of. I think you need to tone down the red more and the fog is really covering everything so lower it and tone it down as well. Maybe you can do something like this with the fog http://www.chrisalbeluhn.com/UDK_Mist_Fog_Tutorial.html Overall I would say work on the…
Hi Yodude! You're making a great job here buddy! Listen to Bunda4th and check chris albeluhn website, it's amazing. I like the progress, perhaps you can play with the perspective of the camera making the room a little bit longer and play with the lights of the wall just like in the reference, also as bunda4th said you can…