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Practise animation, Feedback welcome :)
Hey guys, I just finished up a short animation for a deadline at Uni but I would still like any constructive criticism as I plan on including it in my portfolio when I start building it. Thanks guys :) [ame] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93T9EvFoNM0[/ame] (Couldn't figure out how to embed..) Oh it just auto embeds...… -
Re: Practise animation, Feedback welcome :)
lol Actually, a dope sheet is exactly what I had in mind for ideally working on. I just wasn't sure your level of (classic?) animation training, and didn't wanna start throwing terms at you like 'dope sheet', in case you thought I was calling you a dope or the like. Anyway, yes, if you have that, that's the perfect place… -
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When it comes to lip sync, first of all, have a mouth faces chart to work from. (Something with exaggerated faces making "mm", "ee", "ahh", "oo" faces, etc.) I'm sure a google image search should come up with some good ones. That way, for each mouth sound, you'll have a good reference to work from. Next, take your audio… -
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Look at Animation Phonemes. http://animation.about.com/od/flashanimationtutorials/a/animationphonem.htm generally I create blend shapes of each phoneme mouth shape and you can blend between the mouth shapes to sync with sound. It depends on your workflow and type of rigging of course. -
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Looking good!! :) I think what stands out to me most is when he moves from action to action, it seems like he just kinda glides into the next pose (basically when he moves towards and away from the bucket). Just give him a more direct movement to where he's going, and I think it'll look good. I also agree with Bad Spleen… -
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your link didnt work. Just copy and paste the URL, not the embedded link! -
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You need more movement in the torso, it stays quite still and doesn't flex much. The initial shoulder shrugs are too jerky, and don't flow very well. Overall, it's good. The end with the floppy legs is very well done. I just feel it needs more punchyness, and the key poses need exaggerating more. -
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Thanks dude, any chance of some tips? This is my first lip sync.. -
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Thanks alot Mezz, that really helps actually. Is this pretty much the same as a dope sheet? -
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the first line is very crammed with movement. You want to pick out a word and emphasize that. "Okay so my leg or my left arm occasionally go to sleep", the emphasis is on "occasionally" so put your emphasis on that. The second line you did better. "And you wanna make it a health problem", the emphasis is on "You", and you…
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