Edit: nvm. Not sure what I was looking at with the ears. Was thinking about normal anatomy and they looked way off, but I guess thats where they were on the real sculpture But as others have said. You smoothed it way too much. You need to nail all of the proportions first. Practice helps but you need to practice correctly
I think perhaps you took too much out of the cheek bone now? But the new eyes are better, they have more volume under the brow ridge which is what you lacked. I still think you should put some more though, he is too hollow on that space above the eye on the side farthest from the nose. Also I suppose you could get some of…