Some things you may want to try: - clearly define the borders of the wood. Yours looks very splintered at the edges. - Don't stress the detail pass so much. There's too much going on. - Use deep and dark colors for the spaces inbetween the planks themselves. - When you're happy with it, make some variations of the same…
Yeah your spot on with it but i'm not sure how to get the weight in there! What i was thinking of; -Drop shoulders on foot down. -Lower pelvis on foot down. -Delay foot down's knee lift/push. - adds more recovery to each step as 'part name' deals with weight/stress before pushing up. Is there anything else i should look…