I added a noise affect to make you think, what the hell is going on? And I liquified the monitor so that it looks like a monster attacked it when it got angry I also made the colours very bright and contrasted it with the white so you have variety in the scene.
this is looking awesome. usually not a fan of scifi interior these days, but i dig this. it is almost there. from your last shot, id say just keep away from that harsh white lighting you have on the floor there. its very eye catching, more so than the screens to me. I think brandoom's paint over is a good direction. might…
Instead of a monster you could collapse the hallway at the end of the tunnel. Also you could use the large window area to show something in the distance. Give more impression of the surrounding: A silhouette of a big colony building. I imagine a scene where the corridor in front of the viewer is collapsed and through the…