I recognize the reference :) . nicely done. only thing to note is some of the outlines on the lighter sides are too heavy that flattens a bit. neat shadow on the nose now :D .
I like the way you draw faces. the mix of realism and comic looks neat. You can slide between both directions. The huge eyes works great. Something to crit about is that most of the faces you draw have non-existent nose bridge. I know this style is used everywhere in comics and almost every manga artist simplify that way…
@Mike Yevin: Thanks for the kind words! I checked out your portfolio site, and I like the concept of Eddie. The proportions you gone with are great. Would love to see more like him! @GoodAsNew: Thanks for tip about nose bridges lol. It really did add character that was missing to my faces. And thanks again for the tip…