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1. Re: Writing Crits

   

   Reply by jrs100000 · Jun 2010 · Home› General Discussion

   The phrasing is a bit strange in spots. It could be that you are having trouble with the spell checker or thesaurus flipping words on you. Some examples from the first paragraph: "if you do not have what is mine by sun rise tomorrow, you will regret alot more than you've already bargained" - I guess that should read more…

2. Re: Writing Crits

   

   Reply by Shiver136 · Jun 2010 · Home› General Discussion

   Changed it ;P EDIT: Or I thought I did...