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[PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
Well, finally graduating. Here's what I ended up with. Im gonna make a basic website as well, but for now its just the vimeo link. http://vimeo.com/10941352 Ill be scouring around for a Junior animators job very shortly. Im from just outside of Toronto, but willing to relocate. Thoughts? crits? I only did the animations,… -
Re: [PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
Hey, I'll give ya some crits! First off, I would stress this. There are three rules that you MUST follow in order to get interviews: Your very very very best piece of work should come first. Every piece you show that is worse than the best piece will lower the employers opinion of you. If you take a look at an animation in… -
Re: [PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
It looks like a pretty good basis for a demo reel, however I still feel that all of the animations are very stiff. Try to go back and loosen up the animations so they have more fluidity to them. A good example is when the guy falls off the ladder and hits the ground, there is no sense of weight as he hits the ground, he… -
Re: [PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
Hey, thanks for the crits guys! Its kinda funny how it works out because all the crits are about my older pieces, which makes sense. But ill see what i can do to fix those. The bad doggie was actually my latest piece. But thats ok too! outside eyes always help. May I ask what about it made it a weak piece? I watched an… -
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lol jesus that shouting at the start made me jump. I don't know anything about animation but I'd listen to the guy above. -
Re: [PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
I don't generally look a animators portfolios, but for the most part that was a really pleasing demo reel. The music was not taking away from the reel and in most parts actually added to the visual aspect. Very well done. -
Re: [PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
The animation 0:27-:029 needs more work. The character doesn't seem to be affected by gravity at all. When you're hanging on (or swinging on) monkey bars, the weight of your body will hold you down. When your body is holding you down like that, your arms will have to be extended. When you're swinging from monkey bars, it's… -
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wow, I remember you posting the muay thai chick a while back, you have really improved! I think those bits with her fighting and the bad doggie bit are probably your two weakest links. the rest of the reel looks pretty good in my opinion. Those walk cycles are really sexy btw :) -
Re: [PORTFOLIO] Stefan Lipsius - Animator
looks good for the most part.. the first kick with the chick is a little to quick, you cant really tell what kind of kick its supposed to be. also at the end of that kick (0:43 second mark.) she has to much hip movement. the kneeing to what looks like might be the head or the ribs looks a little stiff. just my 2 cents.
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