Totally dig it man, stripy socks and all! Good fold sculpting! Textures feel a little flat especially on the tie try using your diffuse along side your normal details for maximum impact. Best of luck with the course from someone who's been there.
Thanks mate for the crit, I will have a play with the materials in the UDK to try and punch the diffuse out. After this one is done I need to do two more characters for the game, if you are interested I will post a link to a vid of the game running....once it's done (hand in is May 10th!)