Some odd lighting seams on the side of the table is the first thing that jumps out. For the type of lighting you're depicting, the room seems pretty evenly lit. I would try tightening down the cones of the cast lighting from those hanging lights and softening up the illumination on the walls and ceiling to depict more of a…
Semi-Daily Update: Still a few assets left to do, liquor bottles, juke box, speakers, used glasses / bottles, etc, neon signs, dart boards. But its coming along none the less...
First off, you'd NEVER have tables set up like that in a pool hall. No room if you were shooting from one of the corner pockets, or like the one in the back in that first shot, you wouldn't be able to extend your cue at all shooting up against the wall. Here's a panoramic shot from the pool hall that I play league at from…