You should try working in an FPS of 65 to 90, especially on an interior like this. I think you were in one of your shots, but the rest are too narrow to get a good grasp of this room.
Haha. Adam, the FoV was set at 65 :D I'll set it a bit higher so you can see more. I'm actually an orthographic user, so this whole 'perspective' thing throws me off man ;)