Nice job so far. The biggest problem is it seems to have too generic of a texture. The thing that will sell a texture the most, is having detail in the right places. Yours just seems to be have a slight random noise going around, except you have a bit of edging at the bottom, and that yellow strip. What would help you the…
Its def. looking better imo. Now I would give it what I call a blob pass, where you add a slight random cloudyness to your textures. I have a cloud brush I use for this in photoshop, but you have to make it really subtle. This will make your textures look less flat. Also, did you really look at that link I sent you?…