thanks for the advice. i will work on the over the theme of shapes and rhythm and see what works and what doesnt. thats a good example, all the shapes are related and seems part of the overall design. thanks!
You know, the drawing looks a lot cooler than the model. I think also, at this stage, you should be presenting your model with no diffuse coloration. Its only hurting our (and your) ability to see what you've modeled and how it works or doesn't. I see areas where elements just didn't translate that well, or where you've…