Late reply here You are right Warby, would be really nice to se more animations. What is the most active animation forum? is 11 second club and Strut your reel the is the only i can think of. Hey Mezz! Totally agree about the arm, needs more contrast. Glad to hear about the acrobat jump, I'm kinda happy with it. The hurt…
This is good stuff dude! I've done animating for a spell and while i didn't exactly rock anyones socks off at it, i know how difficult it is. Pink ball is really nice, great emotion in the hands and face.
Sup lads and ladies, Making my own thread now cause I feel my vimeo links get lost in the What are you working on thread amongst all the hipoly and handpainted glory. Seen a couple of animation threads with some really useful advice in them and it would be neat to get some crits. Two lipsyncs http://vimeo.com/9798719…
Nice! The wall jump anim is looking better, I only have one beef with it now: I think the arm needs a bit of an adjustment. It doesn't feel quite right as it reaches up for the wall. My suggestion is to try to make it 'pop' more. Instead of the slow, even-spaced reach that it is, try to keep it bent more until he gets near…
Good stuff. Yay more animators! :D Your lip syncs seem to be a bit off on some of the mouth movements. From what I can see, sometimes they look on, but a lot of the time they only seem to be vaguely close to proper mouth positions. Are you looking at a mouth position chart while you do these? I always had those around when…
in the ice cream animation, when the older character says "do you use real ice cream," his lips are moving a little slower than the audio pretty good job though
Knees look kinda bent inwards from the front, would be nice to see some very subtle movement in the wrist/hand, would be nice to see fully animated cloth on his 3 loincloth bits. generally good stuff.
nice jump and good execution. Good job. But for me there are some timing-issues that are a bit off. I would do the jump to the top faster, everything seems to have the same movement, there should be a bit more like fast-slow-fast, fast to the top, slow at the top, fast down to the other side. Anyway nice animation
Your walk cycle looks great! I agree with Mezz but other than that I have no critique. However I have some critique about your ball in the head animation. The pelvis shouldn't be moving about as quickly as it is in the beginning of the sequence(when he's walking). It should be slightly delayed from the feet movement. Great…