Your reel looks good. Although I have a few points I'd like to add. What kind of animation are you aiming at? Is it just cartooney or are you looking to do realistic animation as well? Most of the animations in your reel look cartooney even though not all of them are cartooney models. The combine running animation is a…
Too many mouth shapes, its popping so fast it doesn't look natural and its steeling focus from everything else. pick the important shapes. The mouth spends too much time open, for example the M in Mother should be emphasized.
I think for something like that you need to push the faster bits faster, and hold some of the slower bits longer. For example one of the slowest parts (of the attack) is the leg kick swinging around, and that's not right. I get what you're going for with the rhythm of the down and up movement, but I think it could be…
Hi again Perhaps I wasn't too clear on my last post. I didn't mean that you should stop doing cartoony animations and only do realistic ones. Cartoony animations are actually more appreciated by people, if done right. Adding humour to your work will make it more interesting in my opinion so by all means, keep doing it. I…