That looks a lot better keep it up! You're learning two things at once, how to animate (12 principles of animation really 10.5) and the technical side 3dsmax/biped, thats a lot to soak up and you're doing good. There aren't too many tutorials specifically created for the workbench as its not all that different from the…
Not too shabby, off to a good start =) Good to see you posting! A few things: .MOV: If you have a little slice of the web some place (dropbox!) post .mov files instead of viemo or youtube. It will allow you (and other people) to scrub frame by frame back and forth and really dig into the animation. .mov its awesome!…