Great stuff man! I really enjoy looking at your progress from your first page to this one. Your digital painting skills have really improved in particular. I do have a couple of suggestions. Your drawing strokes feel a little too tightly wound, like you're drawing from just your wrist and not using the whole movement of…
Beowulf- Yea I usually draw with the whole of my arm when I work in pencils, I need to translate that into my digital work. Also good point about the face ratios, I usually draw the forehead too tall, been trying to eliminate that for the past 2 weeks. thanks for the comments.
Welcome to Polycount :) I think you can benefit from live figure drawing and gesture drawing if you aren't already. www.posemaniacs.com is a good site for quick gestures. You can do this stuff with real people too. Don't need any special pose or something. Loomis' books are also great, keep with them.
Finally felt able to draw properly this morning. Now I have to get back into the pace of things - it sure won't be easy. Full size on the blog vatsel.com