It doesn't matter if the breach is lower then the barrel...that's why its fiction ;P Some of the best fictional guns in games aren't functional in any way (Space Marine Bolter?). I think this new render looks great. You still need to get some varing sizes in your bevels though. Right now they still seem to be the same.…
needs more bolts, fasteners and movable parts. plus its all 1 mesh inside of another mesh inside of another and so on, having separate pieces is good thing, but you should try and make this thing look like is was assembled from a bunch of pieces. right now the whole thing just looks like it was pressed together as one…