I still think her bust line is low. Also, the mid section of her torso is much too elongated and should be shortened up. I've done another paintover for you, it may be a little bit on the extreme side, but shows what I'm trying to get at anyway ;) >^..^<
At first I didn't think the model was too great but as I scrolled down you made some real progress on it :) Looks like it's really shaping up - while the low bust-line isn't exactly a big anatomy issue(hey everyone's different, man) it would make the model more... attractive. Yeah. Everything seems pretty good at the…