I dont like the legs extended. If she wants to climb up, the summon could simple lay out its arm as a ramp. And even though I voted skinny arms I think you should look over the elbow construction since to me it looks like it could break easily. Would perhaps be more charming with the classic cylinderjoints, or perhaps…
her chin is way to pointy and im not talking about the jawline but the muscle underneath the lips that protrudes like a bulb looks like its tapering at the point of symmetry. thats kind of a rookie mistake but its easily fixable. i notice your render is getting these weird tris. i was wondering if youre rendering in some…
Not sure if you want to go realistic or not, but the face is really soft. Adding some pours or dots would help give it more character. Though, that may be a different art direction that your going for. I like it!
I see. :D I also came to think of, the elbows don't make much sense to me. Perhaps simplify the upper arm a bit and make it slimmer, like the robots in UT3. Then the hands will look heavier. :)
Agreed AO pass to much greyscale alike,- try mixing it with different blend modes instead with just multiply. Her face has imo. a poser expression - they eye´s have almost a rectangular shape it looks odd. Also there is a seam right in the middle of her face- which look rather male alike. As for the hair I would add some…
looks good. feel like the skin texture could use a bit of brightening (the chest mostly, looks kinda dark and has flat tones compared to the face). Robot looks great, bigger hands ftw :D good luck with the texturing
Hot damn this is turning out pretty cool. Legs are too straight, beef up the thighs a little. Chin is a little pointy, could be flattened out. personally, I liked the orange/white mix to the texture on the clothes better than the brown cloth.
ok so how about, his arms and legs CAN extend, like patlabor (one of my fav's). Would kinda make sense, when the main char wants to mount him he shrinks down and then when shes on he extends up. hmm?
think about how the material is built. you are lacking some natural seams and hemming on what something appears to be cloth. and you added a bit of lace on the stocking and maybe extrapolate from there. add that design to the overall like a motif or a theme. also good references are always key.