Thanks Sage, leviathan and flow3D. Really helpful comments and I will definately be removing the lip sync (never felt happy with morph tagets) can anyone point me in the direction of a good 3DS Max facial rig? Wow, Flow3D, you really ripped it apart. Worth keeping in mind that I wasn't going for a styalised or cartoon form…
The guy diving into the swimming pool: Great start. I like how he gets ready and the realism is on point. When he dives and goes into the water I don't feel any impact. I like how you have him floating up after the dive but the swim upwards could use some polish. Maybe have him shake his head after he get his head above…