Very jaundice, very blurry. You should try to work in solid brushes and block in color shapes. You might want to read over and do some of these tutorials, http://www.gfxartist.com/features/tutorials (Digital painting tips, tutorials and techniques) As well as give these a look, http://itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm (VERY…
Technically its coming along I see progress, but you should really hammer out a a pose before starting. One thing I like to do and I picked it up here a while ago, was to knock out 5-10 silhouette thumbnails. In that exercise you spend only a few min on each one and work with a solid black brush. it helps you get a sense…