some cool ideas you've got there and the general impression is cool. however there are some flaws you might consider for the next episode or for a revise on this one. the speech is in parts extremely unemotional or just downright boring. if possible take voice actors with much more different voices and much more impact on…
Yeah, japh, i'm seeing a lot of messy paint-strokes and nothing that looks convincingly like metal. If you want painterly armor, reference the very subject of the competition -- the ffxii judges.
just messing with the mats right now. Shooting to do something similar to figuro castle from ff6. Lots more metal crap, gears, machinery etc... hit crunch at work, so my personal production time has gone to the crapper.
The back caves in too much, the armpits and breasts are too low, so is the belly button and she needs more of a waist with less ribcage. Right now, with the proportions you've chosen, she looks borderline anorexic. If a slim woman is the look you are going for then google up some runway models, you'll find plenty of…