I am not sure why you created a second thread for this, but I am closing this one. I will also bump your old thread that is still available to the top of the heap.
Same comments apply: I would kill the animation on the Alien in your reel. Im sorry, but animation isn't your strong point at the moment so I wouldn't show it. Your reel would be stronger without it. Additionally, I would take out your reference shots for the demon. It's too jarring and creates confusion. Just give credit…