quick paintover highlighting areas needing improvement-- sorry, couldn't resist but in all seriousness, some tips that might help; 1. your brushes could use a little less fuzzy. turn up the hardness a bit--because sometimes, no matter how many strokes you put in, those soft brushes will kill detail. i'll get into making…
Saidin: Fyi the vanishing points of objects aren't always the exact same unless you are doing an orthographic projection, or they are all in the same plane and at the same orientation. So the vanishing points of the road and the chair should generally line up, but everything else is pretty well on its own. Indian Boy:…
For the "Set Free" painting, your colors still appear washed out. Nothing is in focus. Your use of light exists, but it needs to direct the eyes. Let it shine on the subject. Contrast. A quick edit: One other note on consistency. Your background appears to have structures lit from the right, but your foreground receives…
My girlfriend had a real cool dream, and it inspired me to make this. Lol, may seem weird, but he's a warrior who uses matchsticks, and his ability to flick em fast enough so that air-friction helps attain ignition temperature . the idea of a warrior didnt come from the dream.. the use of matchsticks sorta' kinda' did lol…
wow this thread was forgotten. wel, now that i have time again, and i'm not in the mood for 3ding quite now [feeling very ill] i decided to improve that which has needed work since i first joined polycount, which i have been pushing off figure studies i'm gonna start off clothed, and maybe some taken out of references in…
unfortunately, i have to go to some places today... some1s house for a lunch party and then a job interview [3d shit w00t] so i only had time for a quickie... in case ur wondering, i want to pump out at least SOMETHING each day Industrial Wonders this one is more like the first one i posted.... er... its like 3 factories,…
dang dude, that one is better, but not by much. are you actually setting up a still life? or just drawing from memory. either way I think my number one critique for you is to observe WAY more. If you had set up a still life with a block that had a beveled edges, you didn't even try to look at how those edges were lit. <…
[ QUOTE ] haha. Elysium, am i missin out on a brilliant diss cuz ur might be hinting at something? lol j/k. its the 'too much white'. tru. [/ QUOTE ] my comment can be taken two ways. yes, there is too much white within your latest image. and it doesn't display emptiness. only brightness. which can be interpreted as…