its really hard to comment on anything there because its poorly presented, and post-processed to hell and back. What am i looking at, the character? If so just post some clean screenshots of him in the bindpose or whatever in your 3d app, with wireframe and texture flats.
not bad from what i can see...the images are too dark/blurry. Get some different renders. Try rendering the character/environments from max with some better lighting to show off your characters, because i cant really crit the character and his creation from what i can see here.(wireframes...texture…