Hey this is looking pretty cool, i like it. You can try baking some AO to it, the rolled up thing for example, isnt casting any shadows at all.It could help seperate the different shapes.
Just echoing the comments made by others. The whole thing looks a bit "meh". There is nothing to make it pop. There is not alot of difference from this model and say, models such as piors and peppis and vahls fzero racers for example. Perhaps they had better concepts, but each of them just seem to catch the eye, has…