I still have no idea what that back wall / carbonite-green thing is. And those fridge things with the sodas in it need more chamfers on the edges. I think you are trying to do Jesus-rays off of the ceiling fans, but the cones are so small they just aren't going to work. Make them longer. You also need to add an actual…
Green...your lighting is green...your lighting is always green. I like the lighting in this piece though..but if you do another test, please dont make the lighting...green. Its looking good man and I like the heads up display on the cash register with the coke cans!
Hey Frank. The end result of your scene has come together very nicely minus a few small flaws however the time it took you to complete this is just not acceptable. On the job you may be asked to create a scene of equal complexity within a a month or so timeline and with this quality, could you do it? I have faith in ya…