The girl's left hand seems to be in a very unnatural position that doesn't seem like it would occur in her pose/stance. The arm almost looks like it's half broken in order to support the hand's position. Other than that everything is quite good, and far beyond my capabilities. EDIT: on a second look the hand issue may be…
go ahead and pimp that third image as an in-line! the other pieces cry out to be complemented by their brother! table-breaking be damned, our bandwidth can handle it. aesir, space and shotgun have mostly covered the broad comments. i also like the first and third best, but i think a lot of that just comes from the second…