Much improved over the first version, but she still looks far from attractive. I'd make her whole lower body a good deal bigger, especially lengthen her legs and waist a lot. I'd make the calves a bit bigger and curvier to match her thighs more. The toes need to be more streamlined. The breasts look very tacked on. They…
For a first or second try, its a good start. I have some time to kill and a new keyboard so that means monster verbose posts while I break it in! If you read all of this I applaud you, if you learn something and aren't in a comma by the end then mission accomplished. This is also an impromptu guide for newbie female…