We can't really see the weird bit around the eye. The images you posted don't make it easy to see - the bit you want critique on is about 10 pixels across, and is white on black. A good technique is to render on a neutral background, with wires overlaying the image. For example - take a few better shots and post those…
You'll notice that in your second example you posted a wireframe shot, but zoomed out - so it looks very messy and this makes it impossible to give any feedback. in your wire overlay, you look like you took a solid render, and a wire render, and pasted the wires over the solid. I can see the body through the legs, and the…
More good presentation examples http://boards.polycount.net/showflat.php...;gonew=1#UNREAD Did there used to be a sticky? I could write a new one I suppose