looks much better. you've got the three loops going down his torso almost perfectly parallel, try grabbing the two 'nipple-verts' and the two at the farthest protruding part of his belly, and moving them left/right, to the outside. should help with the flow, and make those verts really define the shapes you're going for.
haha thanks for the help yeah everyone is saying the same thing my friends as well and you cant be more right. Its just that im not good enough yet to model it with correct anatomy . He indeed looks like a way to big muscled baby I think im going to re-do the whole body and use less definition on it would that be better ?…