Very nice stuff Jelmer. Nicely polished reel editing and rendering too. The expressions on the first 2 creatures are really cool, the chicken thing looks a little odd though, like it's grinning in a dumb fashion - I preferred the look of the coloured painted head concept for it later in the reel. The poses are good too,…
Yeah what is up with the jerky framerate in the QT version? You might want to check that out. Congrats on getting this done Jelmer. It's impressive and very nicely presented. Some thoughts: I agree with the ape drawing comments. As JK said, I think the lack of *actual* human beings in your reel could definitely bite you in…
Excellent work. I don't get why you put your best work in the middle of the reel though. I'd start with the octosapien (textured, highest quality and most fleshed out character) followed by the bird (which I think is the 'weakest' of the three) and finish with the bat. I'd also take out the ape drawings at the end. Your 2D…
The quality of your work makes me want to hide in a corner. Excellent work! I think I like the bat and bird the most, because they are the most convincing creatures. The Octosapien is also a very impressive and well executed model, but I always find animal-human hybrid creatures less believable. I agree with the others…