You might want to repost the images with more of the character and less of the background. It's hard to tell much rom those images. but the thumb position looks very harsh - have a look at the position of your own thumb when your hand is relaxed - it's almost 90 degrees to the rest of the hand.
ya thats pretty nasty i started painting a little and this is what i got so far hi's hands are a bit bigger and maybe i have to shape the torso, shoulders and hips a little thanks.
1) Adjust your render output to closer match the shape of the object you are rendering. Instead of rendering out at 800w x600h render at 340w x 600h. Or fill up the render with other views. That way I don't spend 30min downloading a mostly blank background =/ Who knows you might get more people to view the thread and…