I agree with the comments about overall anatomy and form. I think your definitely improving though. I would like to see you spend more time on the skins and put some more detail in them(last gargoyle included).
I agree with John, even with the reference, this model could look much sexier by moving a few verts for more natural human anatomy. (sexy is what you want right?) The mesh for your rod is a bit freakish, and maybe poly heavy. Nevertheless, refreshing to see some cock between the bombardment of boobs. I can't help but laugh…
why's it nessisary for him to have a raging hardon? pecs look too low. he's got some general anatomy problems as well i think. torso is too long (to my taste. i dont know what kind of gargoyle thing you want to go for) and his legs are too small and kinda sausagey. knees aren't really any thinner than the rest of the leg.…