The front shot I really like. The side shot, however, looks in need of some help. His forhead slopes back on too much of a sharp angle, making his cranium look rather tiny. There's also some odd geometry issue with the neck muscles meeting just below the Adam's Apple. I'm @ work otherwise I'd write more of a C&C, but I…
Jackablade, if your Maya crashes with an error saying it is crashing your file will be saved out to this folder. If it just disappears with no ram dump or error message then you are screwed. I suggest hitting Ctrl + s every time you hit a milestone in your modeling. C:\Documents and Settings\username\Local Settings\Temp